MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES IV

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES IV

 

Kan wrote this haiku/senryu in my blog:

 

Merlion secret

Melquiades potion at work

Magic o’er spirit.

 

 

This is my response:

 

prolonged solitude

spiritual potion lag

neck buried in sand

 

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