MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES XI

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MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES XI

Kan composes this in my blog:

(1)

Somebody please help

Painful plea in agony

Prayed to be free

(2)

This is my response:

painful cry for help

sedate, silent prayers, hope

cocktail of morphine

3 thoughts on “MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES XI”

Kan March 22, 2016 at 7:45 pm

Strange protocol
Insistent on heirachy
Gods answer to call

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1. wonkywizard Post authorMarch 22, 2016 at 8:55 pm
  
  Good persistence. My reply in blog.
  
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2. wonkywizard Post authorMarch 22, 2016 at 8:56 pm
  
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