MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 19

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 19 – HAIKU TO HAIKU

 

(1)

Kan wrote this in my blog:

 

A muddy confluence

Murky rivulets collide

Unsightly divide

 

This is my response:

(2)

 

billion tons of silt

muddy flow burden banks: bless

fertile soil, power

 

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