MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 24

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 24

 

Kan wrote this in my blog:

 (1)

 

Puzzling proposal

Acceptance conditional

Transparent like glass.

 

(2)

 

This is my response:

 

couple drama: curb

peril to cross boundary

curtains behind glass

 

 

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