MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU:ECHOES 25

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU:ECHOES 25

haiku to haiku

 

Kan wrote this in my blog:

(1)

Whiff of wine shatters
Code of secrets unlock
Trysts that tip the tongue.

 

This is my reply:

 

(2)

whine over spilled wine

demonstrate drunken wushu

sigh of secrecy

 

 

 

 

 

 

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