MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 30

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 30

 

Haiku to haiku

 

(1)

Kan wrote this:

 

Simuwu above

Canine guard pitted below

Lived lifes eternal

 

(2)

My reply:

 

river of lives flow

stream of incessant changes

mark memory lanes

 

 

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