MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 31 & 32

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 31 & 32

haiku to haiku

 

(1)

Kan wrote this:

 

Simuwu above

Canine guard pitted below

Lived lifes eternal

 

(2)

 

My response:

 

arise from ocean

civilization unearth

red alert to thieves

 

(3)

 

Somafornaraka comment:

 

oh like this the trees

dance shadows in fruitful breeze-

that markless sun shines.

(4)

 

My response:

 

fertile soil for fruits

ruins bring prosperity

shimmering shadows

 

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