MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 47

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 47

Aussieian wrote this :

(1)

Utopian Horizons

Obsolete Words

Warped Memory’s

 

(2)

My response:

love on pedestal

promises: proven aged wine

long term care and share

 

Kan wrote this:

(3)

Padi field marriage

Lush , plush and bountiful;

Dry,parched in winter

 

My response:

(4)

old and new wedlock

seasonal waxes and wanes

wise compromises

 

 

 

 

 

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