MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 51

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 51

 

 

(1)

Kan commented thus:

 

Hot wind,hot air blows

Anal retentive scowl

Hell freezes over.

 

(2)

My response:

 

independence air

economics as base: Marx

power: time to thaw

 

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