MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 53

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 53

(1)

Kan commented on my blog:

 

The mind plays tricks

Blames outright penile mistake

Conscience worn and washed

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

war is no mind trick

gender role out of context

one nation: all cost

 

 

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