MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 55

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 55

 

 

(1)

 

Kan commented thus:

 

Theocratic crazies

Busybody empathy

Oily and shady

 

(2)

My response:

 

crazy confusion

attune or meddle the strings

music or noise: feel

 

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