MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 56

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 56

 

 

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Kan commented on echoes 55 again:

 

Faiths and fate collide

Escape on arks of hope

Watery graves await.

 

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This is my response:

 

all meet in strange ways

drown: can’t escape belief net

call faith, fate or hope

 

 

 

 

 

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