MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 64

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 64

 

(1)

 

Kan commented on Echoes 61 thus:

 

Born, a long chain on

Freedom:release to despair

Choice-of empty voice.

 

(2)

 

My response, haiku to haiku, is:

 

changing chain in lives

right to impose will on choice

your voice: null and void

 

 

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