MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 66

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 66

 

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 65 thus:

 

Palimpsest peel

Back to primordial appeal

Concocting blood ties

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

certified copy

raw hunch, harsh reality

virtual concort

 

 

NB Kan uses the word: concoct; response from the writer is:

concort

 

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