2 thoughts on “MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 69

    1. wonkywizard Post author

      Kan, thanks for the comment. In haiku, it is not necessarily to maintain 5/7/5 syllables. If you wish, allow me to suggest: meaning of living (life) in the first line. I will response in haiku in the blog.

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