MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 81

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 81

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 79 thus:

 

Feud speech fumes the air

Tunnels atrophied minds

Blowing parts corporeal

 

(2)

 

This is my response:

 

fumes won’t reach heaven

darkness meet light at both ends

rain cleanses dirt away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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