MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 87

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 87

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 86 thus:

 

Vanquish all violence

Encapsulate with tai-chi

Live life one fancies

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

violence marks life

obsession with weaponries

dead in dreamy world

 

 

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