MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 88

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 88

 

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 85 thus:

 

Mores-on bended knees

Genuflect and exposes

Breasted corruption

 

(2)

 

This is my response:

 

bend knees or stand straight

subservient or corrupt

bare chest and muscles

 

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