MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 92

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 92

 

(1)

Aussieian 2011 commented on echoes 91 thus:

 

Two Fleas Hand in Hand

Deserting a Sinking Ship

Destiny Unfolds

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

itchy painful bite

fleas love blood in living fold

haloes not holy

 

 

 

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