MALAYSIAN SENRYU: ECHOES 94

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 94

 

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 93 thus:

 

Five senses hath man

The sixth sense lives in the past

Present and future

 

(2)

 

This is my response:

 

time and senses mix

survival impulse supreme

timeless herd instinct

 

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