MALAYSIAN SENRYU: ECHOES 96

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 96

 

(1)

Aussieian 2011 commented thus on Echoes 91:

 

Stormy Horizons

Elephants in Fearful Mind

Trumpets Skyward Plead

 

(2) This is my comment:

 

sad weather forecast

elephants raged, grass trampled

heaven cannot hear

 

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