MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 102

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 102

 

 

(1)

Emu commented in Echoes 101 thus:

 

Well Interpreted

You Have Deciphered It Well

Accolades and Kudos

(2)

Kan‘s commented thus:

 

Poet, thinker, doctor

Stream of consciousness pervades

Before expiry

 

(3)

 

I shall respond to both thus:

 

choice pick up en route

flow of sceneries passes

enough gas to last

 

no word, no concepts

naming in Eden puzzling

smart serpent gossip

 

gossip as god’s sib

interpreters as godlike

bow with folded palm

 

 

 

 

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