MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 111

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 111

 

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 110 thus:

 

King puppet master

Royal command; open view

Sheep filing in line.

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

strings pull behind screens

shadowy shows in dimmed light

flock culture, tall tales

 

 

 

 

 

 

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