MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 129

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 129

 

 

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 128 thus:

 

Image distorts time

Steals across distant future

Alters consciousness

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

consciousness is time

stores and change images

mind like plain mirror

 

face fast changing world

stressful fixed life prescriptions

bends seen in straight paths

 

bamboos sway with wind

green grove and vertical growth

smart sanctuary

 

 

 

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