MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 143

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 143

 

(1)

Aussieian 2011 commented on Echoes 142 thus:

 

Anticipation

Joy filled Illumination

My eyes know Wonders

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

rail moves by pedal

locomotion by cycling

innocent wonder

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