TANKA TO HAIKU 2

TANKA TO HAIKU 2

 

(1)

Kan commented on Echoes 145 thus:

 

Rhizome roots trampled

Sixty seven years on revived

The dragon’s garland

 

(2)

This is my response in tanka: 5/7/5/7/7

 

ginseng mania

eagle and bear show strong claws

tear and tame dragon

enter domino war game

no winner, mass cemetry

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