CINQUAIN ECHOES 4: ANGER

CINQUAIN ECHOES 4: ANGER

 

(1)

Kan commented on Cinquain 3 in a haiku (5/7/5):

 

Steam whistles;fizzles

Cold draft dissipates anger

Heart embers in gold.

 

(2)

This is my response in cinquain (2/4/6/8/2):

 

anger

alert signal

boundary intrusion

recognize risk of hot feeling

cool head

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