MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 156

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 156

 

(1)

Kan commented on “I wonder: poetic musing” thus:

 

Alter ego fills

Untrodden paths of desire

Lit in full spectrum

 

(2)

This is my response:

 

ego fill and spill

creeping crab-like sense desires

hidden in mud holes

 

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