TANKA ECHOES 10: WRONG MUSIC

TANKA ECHOES 10: WRONG MUSIC

 

 

(1)

Kan commented on Tanka 9 in a haiku/senryu thus:

 

Lion mermaid spits

Dragon breathes fire and cool ice

Frozen quick demise.

 

(2) This is my response in tanka:

 

founder saw a cat

straits too dicey for dragon

add head with strange tail

two mythical animals

tango than tangle in dance

 

 

 

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