MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 162

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU: ECHOES 162

 

(1)

Aussieian 2011 commented in Echoes 161 thus:

 

Cycle of Rebirth

Man’s Regulations Observed

Detritus Disposed.

 

(2) This is my response:

 

detritus in park

vain public relationship

stench and clog drainage

 

 

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