MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 173: WAKE

MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 173: WAKE

 

Kan wrote a haiku on visual tanka, Doom and Gloom, thus:

 

Thin red line divides

Reality from imagined

Severed sanity

 

This is my response:

 

crisscross the red line

sanity pills before sleep

burp out after wake

 

 

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