MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 175 :DEEDS

MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 175 :DEEDS

 

 

Kan commented on tanka 32 in a haiku:

 

Lies are mainly told

With straight face and crooked smile

Truth gasps through white teeth

 

This is my response in haiku:

 

liars are actors

crocodile tears with sharp teeth

betray by its deeds

 

 

 

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