MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 35: DUALITY

MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 35: DUALITY

 

Kan commented on tanka 34 in a haiku thus:

 

Early morning rain

Fresh shower from the storm clouds

Lifts a pale stale dawn

 

I shall respond in a tanka:

 

heat rises to sky

dust and vapour form storm clouds

cold air lurks below

nature plays dual role game

mind muses over meaning

 

 

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