4 thoughts on “MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 48: WARMONGERS

    1. wonkywizard Post author

      Thank you my friend for your tanka, but the fifth line is short of two syllables. Maybe if I am allowed to add, evil, before darkness, it will be 7 syllables without changing your meaning. However I will respond to your tanka with a tanka.

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