MALAYSIAN HAIKU/TANKA ECHOES 58: UNIVERSAL HATS AND SHOES

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/TANKA ECHOES 58: UNIVERSAL HATS AND SHOES

 

Kan was inspired by the photo in Day 3, and wrote a haiku in response:

 

Sage stuckfast agog

Too closing walls immoral

Baggage and the cap

 

I respond in a Tanka Echoes 58: UNIVERSAL SHOES AND HATS:

 

build high walls to climb

kings love power, lust and land

all wear same sized shoes

citizens and kings differ

feeling and coloured mind hats

 

Her poster declared she was goddess; mine meant to be god.  I don’t know this young lass’s name. She was sporting enough to share a photo with me.

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