MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 73: DIVIDED DREAMS

MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 73: DIVIDED DREAMS

 

Claudia responded to Echoes 224 in a haiku, thus:

 

Hands covering face

vain thoughts fade and lose flavor

Layers fall away

 

This is my response in a tanka:

 

hands cannot right shame

wash war blemishes in vain

fake images fall

fail to colonize small states

tricky Janusian thinking

 

 

SHOW OF  Sichuan FAST FACE CHANGE

4 thoughts on “MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 73: DIVIDED DREAMS

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