MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 248: BALD BRANCH 2 Replies MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 248: BALD BRANCH weathered withered leaves bald branch, let go of burden fall to live again Share this:TwitterFacebookLike Loading...
Claudia McGill October 25, 2017 at 10:36 pm I love this haiku. I was inspired by it to write: green leaves now brown-tipped/ the wind reminds tree branches/ loosen hold let go Reply ↓
wonkywizard Post authorOctober 25, 2017 at 11:29 pm Thank you Claudia for responding in a haiku. It depends on how the reader reads the third line; playing on the word again: fall and live a gain etc. Reply ↓
I love this haiku. I was inspired by it to write:
green leaves now brown-tipped/
the wind reminds tree branches/
loosen hold let go
Thank you Claudia for responding in a haiku. It depends on how the reader reads the third line; playing on the word again:
fall and live a gain etc.