MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 302: GRIND

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 302: GRIND

 

 

Mr. Kan responded to haiku 301, thus:

 

Leave off fat and lamb

Live slim live clean live sixteen

Life sans the bitter.

 

This is my response in a haiku:

 

no grudges to grind

basal bile glide through the gut

love is super spread

 

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