Daily Archives: June 2, 2018

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 306: TIMELY REPENTENCE

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 306: TIMELY REPENTENCE

 

past spite to settle

victory euphoria

incite south revolt

 

diplomacy drained

second historical shot

undoing some sin

 

chauvinism cripple

cluthes to climb high altar

corrupt moral chain

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 305: LIVING LURE

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 305: LIVING LURE

 

Y.C. KAN responded to echoes 304 thus:

 

The meaning of life

Lotus unfurling petals

layer upon layer

 

This is my response, haiku to haiku:

 

rise from turbid ponds

lotus unfold loftiness

love lures in living