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MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 308: WEARINESS IN WAY

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 308: WEARINESS IN WAY

 

  1. c. Kan responds echoes 307 thus:

 

On uncharted path

Weary monk pauses midway

Acolytes tremble

 

This is my response:

 

trodden path trembled

travelers pause to keep pace

bored blind acolytes