MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 324: WAITING

MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 324: WAITING

 

weary and wring out

watch time marches on while wait

mood waves wax and wane

 

chase away culprits

sneak in unguarded sense doors

trepass time and kin

 

build stories in brain

catastrophic circuitry

unfold without hold

2 thoughts on “MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 324: WAITING

    1. wonkywizard Post author

      Thank you Kan for your Haiku. Your first line has six syllables; three in carpe diem, meaning “seize the day”. To fit in the structure, maybe just carpe diem spirit (5 syllables). I shall respond your haiku in haiku.

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