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MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 197: LIFE DISTILLATE

MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 197: LIFE DISTILLATE

 

 

Qaiser in 629 wrote on HEALING:

 

Many

 A draft bitter

 As poison, will become,

 A healing for the heart that is,

 In love.

 

This is my response in haiku: LIFE DISTILLATE:

 

life distil the best

love double distillation

brew bitterness off

 

 

 

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 178: DIVISION

MALAYSIAN HAIKU/SENRYU ECHOES 178: DIVISION

 

Kan responded to Echoes 177 thus:

 

Music amidst noise

Prayers heard in high chatter

Sound Zen cultivar

 

I  respond to  his haiku with haiku:

 

disturbed mind divides

unites polar opposites

beyond sound and noise