Tag Archives: Lessons of Korean War

MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 192: ALPHA COCK

MALAYSIAN HAIKU ECHOES 192: ALPHA COCK

 

Y.C. Kan responds to tanka 51 in a haiku:

 

Noise and blown feathers

Missiles and torpedoes clash

Hot air and warm pee

 

This is my response in haiku:

 

 rant pecking order

alpha cock phallic power

hot headed shooting

MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 49: BLEEDING GRAVESTONES

MALAYSIAN TANKA ECHOES 49: BLEEDING GRAVESTONES

 

Aussieian 2011 responded to tanka 48 thus:

 

Creative Falseness

Distortion of Honesty

Epitaphs of Death

The Bear Versus The Eagle

(Evil) Darkness Overwhelms

 

This is my response in a tanka:

 

sad bygone saga

delusional history

no winner in war

two crackpots in nuclear game

poignant epitaph in blood